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Post by 57 - Cheryl on Jan 18, 2009 22:13:39 GMT -5
Do you ever wonder why
those stars above move the way they do?
Have you ever felt moved
by an individual’s words?
The stars in the sky tell a story
I wonder if they connect like people
From here to there
No matter the distance
to make the sky beautiful
just for me and you.
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Post by Dominick on Jan 19, 2009 13:44:26 GMT -5
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Post by 57 - Cheryl on Jan 20, 2009 14:57:23 GMT -5
it doesn't really make sense lol this is yucky lol i don't like it much but thanks
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Post by Dominick on Jan 20, 2009 17:27:48 GMT -5
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Post by 57 - Cheryl on Mar 9, 2009 23:47:26 GMT -5
i forgot i even wrote this. weird. i don't like this one. i might have been a little tipsy writing this lol
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Post by Dominick on Mar 9, 2009 23:49:17 GMT -5
Its better than most of my crap  |
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Post by 57 - Cheryl on Mar 10, 2009 5:48:43 GMT -5
no poem of yours is crappy... i would tell u if it was crappy or not. Now I remember when I wrote this.... I was sitting at the cheap and nasty brothel table and I was thinking about the stars in the sky in Washington D.C. I left for school the next day I think. I used to look at a star and say "star light star bright first star i see tonight i wish i may i wish i might get the wish i wish tonight" and always wished that a new love would flourish or appear in my life and those stars are the reasons we got together.
"Do you ever wonder why the stars move the way they do--- meaning I had to leave home and I'm always moving and it's hard to settle
"the stars in the sky tell a story"--- soulmates coming together
"Moved by individual's words"--- meaning that star wish thing I used to wish on a star
"From here to there, no matter the distance"--- he's over there and I'm over here, wherever he is, he's over "there" lol
"Making the sky beautiful"--- a new relationship
"Just for me and you"-- I used to think all the stars that were HUGE were 2 people that got together from saying the same wish for a soulmate "star light star bright" poem
I hope this makes sense lol....
i know... whatever... i'm corny like that sometimes. hehe
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Post by Dominick on Mar 10, 2009 11:37:01 GMT -5
Aw that's cute. and thanks for your honesty.  |
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