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Post by animatedimp on May 17, 2008 21:52:40 GMT -5
so...i figure i may as well put up some writeing i've done. its old..and full of bad sentance structer and typos, but i have a soft gooey spot in my heart for it anyways. i don't write scripts, so...this is as close as it gets. remember, i'm an artist, not a writer.
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Post by animatedimp on May 17, 2008 21:52:57 GMT -5
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Post by Admin on May 18, 2008 11:29:10 GMT -5
It's pretty cool so far. I will read more of it when I get time. Thanx for posting!
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Post by Admin on May 25, 2008 14:02:27 GMT -5
Hey I finished reading your story. It was very good. There are a few spelling/grammar errors, but other than that, it's a very interesting story. I am looking forward to chapter 2, and finding out why the grilocas are turning evil, what's the deal with Shimestia, and what the Ancients are going to do about Sizune. Well done!
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Post by animatedimp on May 27, 2008 22:21:36 GMT -5
thanks dude. it's a really long story. this will be the third time i've written it. you should have read the originol. i still have it, and i can't figure out what the heck is going on in it. but each time it gets better. it's going REAL well this time.
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Post by Admin on May 28, 2008 1:00:26 GMT -5
Well that's good. It's always nice to revise stories and see how much better they are than the first version. Lockdown, for example was much better the final draft than the first draft.
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Post by Chubby - FACT: Cooler than you on Jun 4, 2008 17:36:10 GMT -5
I knew I liked writing and thought of it as my possible career choice when I was really young and wrote a chapter book ;D
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Post by Johno on Aug 20, 2008 13:30:07 GMT -5
^ Hey, that's my story.   Seriously, when I was in kidnergarten I wrote a chapter book about the Titanic. |
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Post by BabySmokey on Aug 20, 2008 17:06:56 GMT -5
Haha when I was like 5/6 I wrote Scooby-Doo mysteries! HAHA! ;D
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Post by Johno on Aug 25, 2008 18:44:26 GMT -5
;D lol
I always wrote chapter books when I was little. Now I LOVE scriptwriting.
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Post by Jacko on Sept 17, 2008 16:36:48 GMT -5
^ That's the same with me. I used to write stories for just my family to read, but I had a feeling they didn't really like them when I would ask "Did you like it?" and they would say without expression: "Yeah, it was good".  But I'm still writing! |
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But I'm still writing!
