Smiling

[Dominick]

I wrote this in 8th grade.

Just a Smile




I see one person, just one person.
Just that one person in the crowd looks at me,
And their face gleams like the sun.
Just that one person, takes three seconds to electrify his mouth to for that U.
Just one person gave me just a smile.

I take that smile, and I hold it dear.
For just one person, they made my day.

I walk through the crowd, and see just one person.
Just one person, whose day cannot have gone well.
Now, me, just one person, uses his time to make their day.

Maybe, they saw my gesture, maybe they didn’t.
Maybe, just maybe, I helped them.

I gave them just a smile,
Because when all else fails…
A smile will succeed.
Just a smile will succeed.








Yeah, thats it.
Wrote it for the same friend who was being fake after all his fake friends left him cuz they're fake.

[57 - Cheryl]

awww Dominick!!! Yep, I knew I'd enjoy another one your poems. This poem is charming and captivating.

[Dominick]

sadly, all my others aren't on the computer anymore

i'll do what i can to get them on

[57 - Cheryl]

Yay!! I have a bunch of my poems at home in my journals. I don't have them with me at school so when I get home in December, I'll post mine too. Hopefully I see more of yours.

[Dominick]

I haven't written a poem in ages, this will be interesting.

[57 - Cheryl]

Ages, really? You'll find it somewhere inside you, and spill it all out on paper.

[Dominick]

I found an old notebook...



Yup, I've been writing scripts for a while.

[57 - Cheryl]

oooh did ya post those scripts somewhere on here? Where can I find them?

[Dominick]

Sadly, they've been about Lost .

I'm working on a Drama Series of my own though. Basing characters off of me and my friends. I'm working on the character developement stage, need to pick the best main characters, it'll be good.

[57 - Cheryl]

AGH! I seriously need to catch up with Lost! I'm only on season 3. I cant' read anything on here that has Lost in it--- Dan says it is forbidden! hehehe I bet your scripts are great!

[Dominick]

Thanks!
I've gotten Honorable Mention That made my day!