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Post by Deleted on Nov 21, 2008 18:08:40 GMT -5
I recently found one of the first poems I ever wrote. I wrote this before I knew what heartache, hate, and stress felt like. Some time in elementary school. I don't write stuff like this anymore. I'm not that optimistic and adorable like I once was. LOL!
If I could Give the World One Gift
If I could give the world one gift, I would give everyone love. They may think of me as a beautiful child, Or an angel from above.
The world will be so much brighter, After my gift is given. It will change the people and their thoughts, And the ways that they are livin’.
If I could give the world one gift, Love is what it would be. It’s a gift that only you may open, And the giver shall be me.
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Post by Dominick on Nov 21, 2008 20:17:55 GMT -5
This maybe me smile because I can tell that it came from the heart. I'm in a deep depression so, maybe this will help me out.
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Post by 57 - Cheryl on Nov 22, 2008 1:58:37 GMT -5
oh gosh jen you made me like teary eyed. oh this is when i love being female hahahahaha oh i luv ya girl!!!! xoxoxo this is so *sniffles* beautiful!!!!!!! and whats up with the "not adorable and not optimistic" comment before the poem? Man, if you lived across the hall like last year, I'd be running over there and giving u hugs AND then yell at you for that comment. Remember when we had bad days, we'd ring each others doorbell light and be like "i need a hug the biology test majorly sucked". You're still adorable as ever... Stop that.
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