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A Better Place Dec 18, 2008 22:09:50 GMT -5

Post by Dominick on Dec 18, 2008 22:09:50 GMT -5

A Better Place
December 18, 2008

Tonight I want everything to end.
All my problems to disappear,
Maybe tonight will be the end.
Everyone else will be better off
And they won't miss me.
I know that much.
I know life can suck, but
This is more than I can handle.
Everything is falling apart;
And hopefully so will I.
Then the world will be a better place.

5.11-Some Rules Are Meant To Be Broken (HM)
5.13-The Box (W)
6.04-The Final Pieces (W)

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A Better Place Dec 20, 2008 20:39:09 GMT -5

Post by 57 - Cheryl on Dec 20, 2008 20:39:09 GMT -5

ooooh don't make me b!@ch slap you mr dominick. This is a very sad poem and I hope you didn't mean it. Dom, you will run into lots of waves in life that crash down on you and hurl you all around uncontrollably like a rollercoaster but you can't let people or places or things get in your way. You gotta keep on trudging and get past those waves. When you do, you become stronger. It's good you wrote your feelings down though. I applaud you on that part, but still, sounds like you need a hug...... *hugs*

Dominick Greatest Writer of all Time Chicka Chicka Posts: 11,084	A Better Place Dec 20, 2008 20:59:48 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Dominick on Dec 20, 2008 20:59:48 GMT -5
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57 - Cheryl Small-time Scribe Good to be back on RU! :) Posts: 576	A Better Place Dec 21, 2008 2:23:47 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by 57 - Cheryl on Dec 21, 2008 2:23:47 GMT -5 Oh dom smiling back at you

Dominick Greatest Writer of all Time Chicka Chicka Posts: 11,084	A Better Place Dec 21, 2008 10:03:14 GMT -5 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Dominick on Dec 21, 2008 10:03:14 GMT -5
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Post by Dominick on Dec 18, 2008 22:09:50 GMT -5

Post by 57 - Cheryl on Dec 20, 2008 20:39:09 GMT -5

Post by Dominick on Dec 20, 2008 20:59:48 GMT -5

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Post by Dominick on Dec 21, 2008 10:03:14 GMT -5