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Lonely
May 2, 2009 18:48:55 GMT -5
Post by Dominick on May 2, 2009 18:48:55 GMT -5
Lonely
Unsure of myself
Wandering alone.
Ignorance is certainly not bliss.
Wanting more time.
Disrespected
Unappreciated
Pissed.
Lonely.
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Lonely
May 2, 2009 19:03:09 GMT -5
Post by Dean Winchester on May 2, 2009 19:03:09 GMT -5
I like this.
It flows nicely - it has some kind of assonance about it (I think that's the word) - the words sound similar, and it has the same effect when you say them, it's just so easy to read.
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Lonely
May 2, 2009 20:11:22 GMT -5
Post by Dominick on May 2, 2009 20:11:22 GMT -5
Thanks man.  Wrote it on a whim. |
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Lonely
May 3, 2009 1:26:24 GMT -5
Post by Admin on May 3, 2009 1:26:24 GMT -5
You understand how I feel!
*cries*
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May 3, 2009 8:38:00 GMT -5
Post by Dominick on May 3, 2009 8:38:00 GMT -5
*is already crying from the broken news on podcast*
Dan, thank you for your empathy!
*wipes tear*
*eyes Chris*
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Lonely
May 3, 2009 13:57:36 GMT -5
Post by Admin on May 3, 2009 13:57:36 GMT -5
*wipes tear*
*also glares at Chris, but not sure why*
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May 3, 2009 17:13:28 GMT -5
Post by Johno on May 3, 2009 17:13:28 GMT -5
I'm not that sad, because I'll still continue on anyways (even if the rest of my team decides not to).
And we won't have the limited budget any more, so that's good! ;D
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Lonely
May 3, 2009 18:00:24 GMT -5
Post by Dominick on May 3, 2009 18:00:24 GMT -5
What if WE don't want it continued? Huh?   |
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Jul 3, 2009 3:03:30 GMT -5
Post by 57 - Cheryl on Jul 3, 2009 3:03:30 GMT -5
Dom I like this one. interesting and unique. I like your poetry. It has feelings in them and you do a good clear job portraying that. xoxo |
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Jul 3, 2009 11:57:24 GMT -5
Post by Dominick on Jul 3, 2009 11:57:24 GMT -5
Thanks Cheryl!  I stopped posting poetry for a while, but I'll try to start again. |
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Jul 12, 2009 18:26:22 GMT -5
Post by Deleted on Jul 12, 2009 18:26:22 GMT -5
I haven't been on this thing in ages. Dangit. Just wanted to say I love the poem, Dom. |
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Jul 25, 2009 0:02:45 GMT -5
Post by Dominick on Jul 25, 2009 0:02:45 GMT -5
Aw, thanks! I've been writing songs lately, came on to post some. |
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I stopped posting poetry for a while, but I'll try to start again. 
