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Mirage
Sept 4, 2009 15:49:15 GMT -5
Post by Admin on Sept 4, 2009 15:49:15 GMT -5
Walking through the desert was a man. Skin burned by the sun, hair covered in sand. Thirsty and hungry, he thinks he’s going to die. Then he sees something in the corner of his eye. A vision of water and all the food he can eat. So he brushes himself off and picks up his feet. He runs towards the feast that has made his day. But every step that he takes makes it seem further away. His mind fueled by thoughts of food and drink. While his bodily functions are starting to sink. For men cannot live on just thoughts of what they crave. Without proper sustenance, he’ll find himself a grave. Did the man get what he needed to eat? No, for it was a mirage caused by the heat. What happened to this man who crawled through the stones? All that’s left of him now is a pile of bones.
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Mirage
Sept 4, 2009 20:53:21 GMT -5
Post by Dominick on Sept 4, 2009 20:53:21 GMT -5
This is really, really deep.
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Mirage
Sept 4, 2009 21:50:19 GMT -5
Post by Sam Winchester on Sept 4, 2009 21:50:19 GMT -5
Wow, Dan. This is really good. It had a Stephen King type vibe to it.
I read it over to fully grasp it's scope.
Very good.
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Necktie
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Mirage
Sept 4, 2009 22:04:11 GMT -5
Post by Necktie on Sept 4, 2009 22:04:11 GMT -5
Dan. Do you need a hug?
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Mirage
Sept 5, 2009 6:13:31 GMT -5
Post by Admin on Sept 5, 2009 6:13:31 GMT -5
Thanks, glad you guys like it.
And yes, I could use a hug.
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Necktie
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Mirage
Sept 5, 2009 11:54:14 GMT -5
Post by Necktie on Sept 5, 2009 11:54:14 GMT -5
Is this about the Brit?
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Mirage
Sept 14, 2009 22:07:27 GMT -5
Post by Admin on Sept 14, 2009 22:07:27 GMT -5
Ha, no! I wrote this before that.
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