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Post by 1900djshaa on May 21, 2013 18:32:39 GMT -5
Chapter 1 Summary Billy stared at his growing daughter admiring how beautiful she had turned out. Billy wondered back on all the good Sophie has brought to his life. The sound “Daddy come over here” awakened him from the most beautiful daydream. Sophie was running around in the grass keeping her glasses up to her nose. Billy stood up and started chasing her around. She had became faster finally, Billy caught her. Sophie was down on her back laughing slowly and recovering her balance. Billy got up with his hands. Still down with his knees he peeked around and saw the men he had betrayed a long time ago.
Chapter 2 Summary Marco and Thompson were watching Billy with their hawk like eyes. Marco was about to take a sip from his coffee and took a quick glance to where Billy was kneeling with his daughter. Billy turned around quickly like somehow he felt his watchers. Marco, mumbling to Thompson, who seemed furious stared at Billy with red shot eyes.
I need help expanding these two chapters to a maximum of 3 pages
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Post by Dale on May 21, 2013 18:45:46 GMT -5
Use more words...
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Post by Kurai on May 21, 2013 19:14:35 GMT -5
lol. Um. Are you sure you're not trolling?
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